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    How To Ramp Up Your Business With Sizzling Ad Copy
    Copyright © 2005, Cathy Qazalbash

    What is the importance of Ad copy? Your ad copy, sales letter 
    will make or break your business. You can have the best 
    product/service but without a good sales copy, you cannot sell 
    anything. Website visitors are becoming increasingly savvy, hype 
    and hard selling no longer work, as they used to. A subtler 
    approach is necessary and gets good results.
    
    Common mistakes in business ad copy:
    
     * Features not benefits
    
     * Too much hype
    
     * Misuse of graphics
    
     * Using the negative trigger words
    
     * Font hard to read
    
    
    The most frequent error in ad copy, is listing features not 
    benefits. Your visitor does not need to know how fancy the 
    product is, they are just looking for the answer to “what’s in it 
    for me?” Why should they buy your product, or use your service? 
    You will need to persuade them that the benefits for them are 
    irresistible and they would be seriously missing out if they did 
    not buy your product/use your service.
    
    Here is one of the most irritating of all mistakes, hyping up 
    your product/service. Nobody likes to be played for a fool least 
    of all your prospective clients. Unbelievable exaggeration (hype) 
    does just that. It insults the intelligence of your reader and 
    will alienate them very quickly from the sale. Would you buy from 
    someone who treated you like this? Besides if your product is 
    good you will have enough real benefits not to need any useless 
    hype.
    
    Graphics, be careful with these. Small relevant pictures can go a 
    long way to helping sell your product, especially if you are 
    selling hard goods and e-books. Some websites try to use cartoon 
    graphics and different eye catchers, this can divert your visitor 
    and take away from your sales message. Again this can bring down 
    the prestige of your site. Presentation is very important with a 
    business site. Your visitor needs to take you seriously in order 
    to buy from you, they need to know you are a professional. 
    Presentation in your ad copy is especially important if you are 
    offering a service.
    
    Here is a more subtle mistake and one that with some careful 
    planning and knowledge does not need to happen. The use of 
    negative “trigger words.” If you have been on the internet for 
    any length of time you will have heard about “Mr. Fire” Joe 
    Vitale, a legendary copywriter and article writer. Joe Vitale is 
    the master of the use of “trigger words” and subtle “Hypnotic 
    Selling.” What are “trigger words?” These are words that 
    subconsciously spark a feeling of well-being and urge to buy in a 
    reader. For example “Ramp Up” your business with... “Boost" your 
    business using this... “Discover the secret”.... I am sure you 
    have seen these and many more (there are over 200 ) When you have 
    looked at good sales pages.
    
    Alternatively negative “trigger words” will have the opposite 
    effect, for example “low-income” “failure” and many more that you 
    can probably think of. These words generate an unconscious 
    feeling of depression and sadness with a reader and deter him 
    from buying. Don’t you buy more when you are in an upbeat mood? 
    Be careful how you write your sales letter or even a small ad, 
    words are very powerful in copywriting and will make or break the 
    sale. As all good copywriters will tell you selling is all about 
    understanding your visitors’ mindset.
    
    Readable font, includes use of punctuation, capitalization and 
    color arrangement. Let me explain:
    
       Excessive use of punctuation, especially the !!! exclamation 
       point and sometimes the??? question mark. This distracts the 
       reader and is a turn off for sales. Respect your reader’s 
       intelligence and do not belittle your reader with this 
       unprofessional technique.
    
       Too much CAPITALIZATION is also unprofessional and has the 
       same effect. Capitalization is known as shouting a word. Do 
       you the reader want to be shouted at? I am sure this does 
       not put you in a buying mood.
    
       Color combination is also a sign of being a good sales person. 
       Always write with credibility in mind. As mentioned 
       credibility is very important in convincing your prospective 
       buyer. Unusual fonts and color combinations will take away 
       from your sales copy and leave an unfavorable impression with 
       your reader. Size is a factor too, make sure the font is 
       normal sized. Style of font should be Ariel, Times Roman, 
       Veranda, or similar styles, do not make a sales letter in 
       fancy type set, it will distract your reader, (selling art 
       work and cartoon drawings may be an exception to the rule).
    
    
    Always keep your reader in mind. Write your sales letters as you 
    would to a respected friend. Remember your visitors are taking 
    time out of their busy schedule to read your sales letter, write 
    in a concise, persuasive, polite way, as you would expect to be 
    treated by a sales person when you want to buy something. With 
    these points, you will be able to ramp up your business with 
    sizzling ad copy and improve your sales 110% and more. 
    



    Writer's Resource Box:
    Cathy is a freelance writer and copywriter. She has written
    over a hundred articles on small business development and
    marketing. She has also written promotional articles and
    sales copy for a variety of businesses. and is the publisher 
    of 2 online publications. Her resource websites are:
    http://advertise-your-business.com
    http://a1-newsletters.com
    http://a-y-b.com




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