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    How To Crank Out Killer Web Copy That Sucks In Money Like Crazy! Part 2
    Copyright © 2005, Dan Lok

    KILLER CONCEPT #6 Tell 'em Before You Sell 'em 
    ======================================
    
    The essence of this concept is the promise of a reward just for 
    reading the content.  The lure that there’s a payoff at the end 
    that will justify the extra effort and time required to read 
    further.
    
    These headlines tell readers what they can accomplish and how 
    they can do things better. Provide tips, helpful advice, or 
    reveal some valuable, usable information and your reader will be 
    hooked.
    
    For example, you can use headlines such as:
    
    * How To Remove Carpet Stains In Minutes! * How to Make Your 
    Stomach Flat And Hard In 30 Days! * Do You Do Any Of These 
    Embarrassing Things? * 17 Stocks You Should Dump Right Away * 12 
    Special Tax Strategies That Are Making Doctors Rich! 
    
    This strategy works great with service-type business. If you’re a 
    realtor, a plumber, a consultant, or whatever, I highly recommend 
    you creating some sort of information product -- a free report, a 
    free audiocassette or videotape -- that gives your prospects 
    information. 
    
    Let’s say you’re a mortgage broker, you can try something like 
    this...
    
    Case Study #6
    
    Warning! Do NOT Refinance or Get a Home Equity Loan Until You 
    Have Read This Free Report That Reveals The Biggest Mistakes 
    People Make With Their Finances and Their Mortgages!
    
    The purpose of your FREE report is to provide enough helpful 
    advice and establish you as a "leader" in your field. It will 
    demonstrate to customers that they would benefit from working 
    with you in the future when they need your products or services. 
    
    The reports deliver a non-threatening, non-salesy message that 
    shows the prospect that you have empathy and compassion for their 
    life and their concerns. 
    
    This empathy is the building block of trust. And once the trust 
    is established from the first reports, then you can follow-up 
    with phone calls or mailings to "seal the deal."
    
    Put yourself in your prospects’ shoes, when you’re ready to 
    buy... who you gonna call? (Ghostbusters?)  The guy who just 
    wants to “vacuum” your VISA or the guy who takes time to educate 
    YOU? 
    
    ====================================== KILLER CONCEPT # 7 An 
    Ethical Bribe ======================================
    
    There's a reason they put a "prize" in every box of Crackerjack. 
    People are greedy.  They love something extra, or something for 
    nothing.
    
    So make your offer as irresistible as possible! Not just 
    compelling…irresistible. There’s always something you can include 
    in your offer that will turn a "no" into a "yes."
    
    Unleash the mercenary from within! Pile on the bonuses till your 
    prospects are crushed under the weight and simply give in! Do not 
    stop until they say, “You win, take my money!” 
    
    Here’s a perfect example...
    
    Case Study #7 – Dan Kennedy’s Inner Circle Newsletter
    
    From Dan Kennedy I want to give you the tapes of my latest 
    Marketing & Moneymaking Super Conference, which people paid 
    ,487.00 each to attend, free.
    
    FREE:
    
    6 Audio Tapes, 8 Special Reports, 1 Book, 2 Critique 
    Certificates, Telephone Consulting & Coaching, a veritable 
    truckload of moneymaking information and assistance...ALL 
    FREE...and all you have to do to get all of it is say “maybe.”
    
    Have I finally lost my mind?
    
    Dan's newsletter only costs $ 149 a year, but look at all the 
    FREE stuff he gives to people who subscribe. 
    
    If that’s not a shameless bribe, I don’t know what is. And this 
    is an instance where you can really see why Dan Kennedy is 
    considered the king of marketing: he makes the product (in this 
    case the newsletter) secondary to the bribe. 
    
    This offer has worked for Dan Kennedy for many years and has 
    brought in thousands and thousands of new subscribers.
    
    Lesson learned: Everybody loves a good deal.
    
    ====================================== KILLER CONCEPT #8 Bill me 
    later/free trial offers ======================================
    
    This concept is similar to the ethical bribe concept. Again, 
    you’re taking the risk off the prospect’s shoulders and putting 
    in right into your pocket. How's that for trust-inspiring?
    
    Magazines do this all the time. You simply send in a reply form 
    saying you want to subscribe, and they bill you later.
    
    Case Study #8 – Nightingale Conant 
    
    At last! For the first time, there is a complete self-training 
    program on the most amazing achievement technique ever 
    discovered...
    
    Announcing The Power of Visualization by Lee Pulos, Ph.D. - we 
    invite you to try it for 30 days FREE!
    
    This concept is wonderfully powerful, but don’t overuse it. It 
    can cheapen the value of your products.
    
    And one more thing: Make sure the prospect believes your product 
    is a good deal or you will get a lot of returns. The three most 
    important words in the "Bill me later" book are:  Over-deliver. 
    Over-deliver. Over-deliver. 
    
    ====================================== KILLER CONCEPT #9 “Oops... 
    I Screwed Up” ======================================
    
    If you’re offering an incredible deal that sounds almost too good 
    to be true, you'd better explain why. If you don't, consumers 
    will just assume your "too good to be true" deal is just that --
    a fake. They won't walk away from your sale... they'll run.  
    
    And in a related story: if there’s a flaw in what you’re selling, 
    admit it.
    
    Here's an example. You bought too much inventory in the fall when 
    business was hot, and now it’s winter and it’s the “off-season” 
    for what you’re selling. Don't try and hide the truth. Tell it to 
    the world.
    
    Case Study #9
    
    MY MISTAKE IS YOUR WINDFALL
    
    I’m practically giving my widgets away just to clear our Widget 
    Warehouse
    
    “You get these one of a kind widgets at 70% off for one simple 
    reason: I over bought in the fall, and now I’ve got inventory 
    just sitting here. If I don’t sell it, I’ll have to lay-off 2 of 
    the guys in the warehouse. Rather than do that, I thought I’d 
    generate a little revenue and give you (my loyal customers) a 
    great deal at the same time.”
    
    Being open and honest like this can boost the credibility and 
    believability of your offer. Makes perfect sense doesn't it?
    
    When you admit to a flaw or take responsibility for a mistake, 
    people perceive that you’re being honest with them. People like 
    that. And nine times out of ten, when you tell someone you've got 
    a problem, they'll want to help (if they can.) YOU like that!  
    
    I encourage you to give it a try.
    
    ====================================== KILLER CONCEPT #10 No 
    Wind-up…Just Pitch ======================================
    
    Sometimes -- when you have a truly great product or service…when 
    you know you've got an unbeatable price... when you know the 
    audience reading your ad is hungry "like the wolf" for what you 
    have to offer -- sometimes, less is more. Just make your pitch.
    
    No gimmicks. No secrets. No stories. No excuses. No ums and ahs. 
    No ifs, ands, or buts. Just make your case in a simple, 
    straightforward way.
    
    Case Study #10 – John Childers’ Speaking Course
    
    If you’ve been wondering how to make an obscene amount of money 
    as a speaker, just as I’ve done for 20 years...
    
    I’ll reveal all my strategies, step-by-step in a powerful 4-day 
    Speaker Training course…
    
    I've assumed ALL the risk and taken ALL the excuses out of your 
    way to success in what has been called "the world's highest paid 
    profession!"
    
    ====================================== KILLER CONCEPT #11 “Don’t 
    believe a word I say, listen to THIS guy.” 
    ======================================
    
    This is a relatively advanced technique. It's called 3rd party 
    endorsement.
    
    Basically, instead of doing your own selling, you have someone 
    else pitch your stuff for you. Say how fantastic you stuff is. 
    How it has changed their lives. How your stuff is the best thing 
    since sliced bread or flush toilets.
    
    The best way is illustrate this concept is by showing you a 
    headline of a lead generating ad Joe Polish placed in various 
    carpet-cleaning magazines.  Joe didn't do the writing, himself; a 
    carpet cleaner named Jim Wolverton wrote this free report. 
    
    Free report, nothing -- it's a great big, hairy advertorial (an 
    advertisement in an editorial's clothing).  Wait and see.
    
    Case Study #11 – Joe Polish’s Free Report
    
    EXPOSED!
    
    Small Town Carpet Cleaner Speaks Out And Reveals The Raw Truth 
    About That Marketing Guy, Joe Polish, Who Advertises In This 
    Magazine All The Time!
    
    The whole story, or should we say "ad," centers on how Jimbo was 
    skeptical about Joe’s marketing course. 
    
    Jim didn’t really believe that Joe's course could deliver, but he 
    was desperate so he bought the package. Of course, it blew him 
    away and he learned a ton of stuff. He’s now making money hand 
    over fist and is as happy as a pig in truffles. At the end, he 
    closed by saying he wasn’t paid or given anything to write this 
    ad (letter) up about Joe Polish. 
    
    "Exposed!" is basically a LONG and DETAILED testimonial written 
    like a feature article in a newspaper or magazine. This kind of 
    ad theme is especially effective as a follow-up. If you’re doing 
    direct mail, this could be your 2nd or 3rd letter in your mailing 
    sequence.
    
    Wrapping Things Up
    
    Can you see how these amazing concepts might work for your 
    business?
    
    There are probably another dozen ad themes that are commonly 
    used. But these are the diamonds in amongst lesser gems. I’ve 
    been using these concepts successfully for many years. Other 
    marketers have been using them for decades. 
    
    If you only use these ad themes, you’ll be so stinking rich 
    you'll need a special "Moneybags Deoderant" and have to rent a 
    Brinks truck to get your money to the bank.  
    
    Now go out there and apply this stuff! 
    



    Writer's Resource Box:
    Dan Lok is known as "The World's #1 Website Conversion Expert", 
    with a proven track record of selling over $25.7 million dollars 
    of merchandise and services. Dan has resuscitated copy that was 
    previously in "critical condition" and helped his clients to 
    double and triple their conversion rates… some as much as 417%!!! 
    More than 200 websites have been "Lok-ed" and loaded for Internet 
    action. Go to: http://www.WebsiteConversionExpert.com




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