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    How To Crank Out Killer Web Copy That Sucks In Money Like Crazy! Part 1
    Copyright © 2005, Dan Lok

    Do you have writer’s block?
    
    Do you have trouble staring at a blank piece of paper and don’t 
    know how to get started? 
    
    You’re NOT alone.
    
    Believe me, I know how tough it is to sit down and create killer 
    copy from scratch, especially if you’re green. There are times 
    in my life when my mind is completely frozen and I can’t write 
    squat.
    
    Therefore, I’ve dug around in my Bags of Tricks and come up with 
    11 battle-tested ad themes that will help you blast through your 
    writer’s block and crank out brilliant, cash-producing copy in 
    no time flat!
    
    Plus... I’ll give you suggestions on how to adapt these concepts 
    to your own business for maximum effectiveness!
    
    
    ======================================
    KILLER CONCEPT #1
    Problem, Magic Solve
    ======================================
    
    This is one of the marketing profession's oldest and probably 
    most widely used ad themes. It has three distinct sections:  
    you state the problem (usually a pain your target market is 
    experiencing), you stir up the problem, and then you offer 
    your stuff as a solution for the problem.
    
    Here’s a great example...
    
    Case Study #1 Craig Proctor’s Real Estate Success System
    
    "How You Can Make Well Over $ 100,000.00 Per Year As A Real 
    Estate Agent Working Less Than 40 Hours A Week.... Have A Top 
    Income AND A Life..... And NEVER Have To Make A Call You Dread 
    Or Waste Your Time With Unrealistic Sellers Or Insincere Buyers, 
    Ever Again."
    
    The Problem: Most real estate agents are frustrated with the 
    income they’re taking home. They’re working their butts off and 
    they’re totally burnt out. They hate cold calling. And they want 
    to work less and make more. 
    
    The Solution: If you buy Craig’s stuff, you’ll never have to 
    make a cold call again. You’ll have dozens of highly qualified 
    prospects calling you. You’ll be able to take weekends off. 
    You’ll be able to get out from under the ridiculous workload. 
    Most importantly, you’ll finally be able to make a 6-figure 
    income as a real estate agent.
    
    The Lesson: Most people are looking for a quick fix. John 
    Carlton put it this way:  "Most guys would like to eat a MAGIC 
    pill, go to bed, and wake-up in the morning with a beautiful 
    spouse and a million bucks in their bank account.”
    
    Always keep that in mind when you write. The quicker and easier 
    you can make it for ‘em, the better.  (And if you know where to 
    find that magic pill, PLEASE give me a call!)
    
    
    ======================================
    KILLER CONCEPT #2
    Tell Me A Good Story, and I’ll Give You My Money.
    ======================================
    
    Remember when you were a little kid? What was your favorite 
    thing? That’s right. You asked your mom, “Read me a bedtime 
    story.”
    
    Stories sell. People love to hear a story. A story paints a 
    picture in the mind of the reader/consumer.  A GOOD story can 
    communicate your message subliminally, by stimulating thoughts 
    and emotions.  And the BEST stories remove the skepticism and 
    barriers that can prevent sales. 
    
    Here’s a fantastic "tell me a story" headline example:
    
    Case Study #2 – Grandma Ruby’s Magic Pain Relief Cream
    
    How An 82-Year-Old Great Grandma From Iowa Accidentally 
    Discovered An Amazing Secret That Will Almost Instantly 
    Erase Your Back And Joint Pain!
    
    The ad goes on talking about how a little gray-haired, 
    82-year-old great grandma named Ruby Zimmerman from remote 
    farming town in Iowa was mixing up a batch of moisturizing cream 
    from her kitchen table... and how she accidentally stumbled upon 
    a formula that ends chronic joint and back pain. And so on.
    
    Does your product or service have an interesting story? 
    
    
    ======================================
    KILLER CONCEPT #3
    "I've Got A Secret”
    ======================================
    
    Pssst. Hey, come here...closer. You wanna hear a really juicy 
    secret? 
    
    Gotcha! 
    
    You're probably leaning in to this newsletter right now, ready 
    to "get the secret."  The desire to know is a powerful force. 
    It's led to the word 'secrets' being WAY over used, but that 
    is why it is used.
    
    People are nosy as hell and they love to feel "in the know."  
    Everyone gets a kick out feeling like an insider and getting 
    special treatment because of their "secret" knowledge. 
    
    If you've got something, don't FLAUNT IT...TAUNT with it.  Make 
    it appealing, alluring, and most of all TOP SECRET…and you'll 
    make the sale.
    
    Check this out...
    
    Case Study #3 - GuyGetsGirl™ Guide
    
    “Discover How To Pick-Up Beautiful Women So Easily, and So 
    Fast, You’ll Have THREE Dates By The End Of This Weekend... 
    And a Girlfriend (if YOU want one) Soon After!”
    
    Uncover Powerful Insider Secrets That Will Skyrocket Your Sex 
    Life And Make Wonderful Women Beg You To Date Them – Even If 
    You’re Bald, Fat Or Ugly!
    
    Pretty intriguing, huh?  Every Mr. Wrong has dreamed of being 
    Mr. Right and has probably wondered "What do THEY have that I 
    don't?" 
    
    If you can identify an information pocket and then create the 
    "desire to know," in your prospects, you won't have to overcome 
    any objections they may have…they'll do that themselves!
    
    
    ======================================
    KILLER CONCEPT #4
    Put Your BIG Money Where You BIG Mouth Is - Guarantees
    ======================================
    
    If you’re selling stuff that delivers over-the-top, measurable 
    results that your customers can see, touch, smell, feel, or 
    count... then you’re in a position to use this 
    amazingly-effective concept.
    
    Case Study #4 – Marlon Sanders’ Amazing Formula
    
    Your Products Sell Like Crazy Or Triple-Your-Money-Back!
    Discover the Amazing Formula that Sells Products Like Crazy!
    
    “Oh no, Dan. I can’t offer a guarantee. What if people rip me 
    off?” 
    
    You chicken...or should I say "Chicken Little."  The sky isn't 
    falling! 
    
    Listen closely: People WILL rip you off no matter what you do. 
    It’s part of the business. It doesn’t matter what the hell you 
    do, some morons will use your product, return it, and ask for 
    a refund. Period.
    
    You can't protect yourself from the "bad guys," but you can let 
    the "good guys" know that you're a "white hat," too.  When you 
    offer a guarantee that you will reach into your own pocket to 
    "make things right"... you will flip a lot more customers who 
    would never otherwise consider trying your stuff. That’s because 
    your guarantee has nudged them over the dividing line between 
    "Trust" and "No Trust."   
    
    Think about it:  do you seriously give a damn if making a 
    handful of refunds will bring you an EXTRA one-hundred more 
    sales? Do the math. Calculate your numbers and you’ll know 
    if this concept will work for you. 
    
    
    ======================================
    KILLER CONCEPT #5
    “What’s New, Pussycat?”
    ======================================
     
    Most of us are interested in news of some kind.  That's why 
    we've got newspapers, magazines, and 24-hour news channels.  
    And why do we buy “news” papers and watch television “news” 
    everyday? Because new discoveries fascinate us...especially, 
    news that is related to our individual preferences, biases, 
    and personal interests. 
    
    Press releases are the most common application for the news 
    headline, but they can also work in many other areas.
    
    Case Study #5 – The Anti-Aging Super Serum
    
    Amazing Anti-Wrinkle Breakthrough!
    
    “Doctors Are Shocked By New 30 Second Face-Lift-In-A-Bottle 
    That Turns Back The Clock 10 Years In Only 60 Days”
    
    “Recent Discovery Reverses Aging Beats Wrinkle-Reducing Retinol 
    By 150% It Surpasses Botox (While Being Safer)... And You’ll 
    Save A Small Fortune! Read The Astonishing Story Below”
    
    You get the idea?
    
    If you have news to share -- a new product or a new use for an 
    old product, for example -- be sure to “install” that news into 
    your headline in a big way.
    
    See you in Part 2.
    
    Dan Lok 
    



    Writer's Resource Box:
    Dan Lok is known as "The World's #1 Website Conversion Expert", 
    with a proven track record of selling over $25.7 million dollars 
    of merchandise and services. Dan has resuscitated copy that was 
    previously in "critical condition" and helped his clients to 
    double and triple their conversion rates… some as much as 417%!!! 
    More than 200 websites have been "Lok-ed" and loaded for 
    Internet action. Go to: http://www.WebsiteConversionExpert.com




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