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    Bad News Resume Boo Boos
    Copyright © 2005, Laura Gabel

    What do you think of my resume?  What’s wrong with my resume?  
    Why isn’t anyone responding to my resume?  These are some of 
    the first questions I get as a Career Transition Expert.  Let’s 
    start off with the basics and acknowledge that contrary to many 
    resume-writing books, THE resume is not the most important part 
    of a job search.  Your resume can be an effective tool if 
    designed and used correctly.  It can also mar and hurt your job 
    campaign.  So let's take a look at some of the --BAD NEWS RESUME 
    BOO BOOS-- I’ve garnered over the years.  I have no doubt that 
    these 5 tips will change the way you look at your resume.
     
    
    Tip 1: LOV'EM BUT LEAV'EM
    
     I mean your friends and family that is...be sure to leave them 
    out of your resume rewrite campaign.  If you don't believe me, 
    give your resume to 5 of your best friends or relatives and see 
    if you don't get 8 different opinions.  Everyone has a preference 
    and, everyone has an opinion.  Uncle Harry, the CPA, may want you 
    to list every job you had since you were 19, but unless you're 
    sending it to the IRS forget it.  The best thing you can do with 
    your friends and family is to give them your resume with specific 
    instructions.  First, make sure you tell them what you’re looking 
    for.  Second, encourage them to bird dog their friends.  You 
    never know--your Aunt Hazel may be godmother to a CEO.  And above
    all communicate!  Make sure you follow up with whomever they gave
    your resume to and ask for more leads and advice.
     
    
    Tip 2: ASK & YE SHALL RECEIVE
    
     Get a second opinion on your resume by giving it to 2 people 
    who you really respect and admire, and or 2 folks that know the 
    industry or field you want to get into.  Four critiques are 
    plenty and don't change your resume until all verdicts are in. 
    No use in modifying, cutting, pasting, and annihilating what 
    you’ve written.  If you've engaged a consultant--trust your 
    consultant’s advice.  Otherwise, you'll confuse yourself and you 
    may end up with a disjointed mess.  So first sit down with your 
    notes, see if there’s a common thread, and if the suggestions 
    feel good in your guts, do the surgery.  In the end your resume 
    has to be you. 
     
    
    Tip 3: FAILURE TO ENGAGE
    
     Make like a Star Trek Captain.  In order to get somewhere 
    you’ve got to ENGAGE.  Ever open your snail mailbox at home and 
    groan?  Watch what you do.  If you’re like most people, you’ll 
    read the first several lines, which takes about 3-5 seconds.  
    You’ll read the top of the letter, the bottom of the letter 
    and then decide whether you want to spend some time on what's 
    in between.   Otherwise you'll toss it.  Likewise with resume 
    readers.  So engage your reader quickly, top and bottom. Here's 
    4 bonus tips:
    
     -- Don't confuse the reader.  Tell them what you want in your 
        Objective.  If it's more than one line, then you probably 
        don’t know what you want.  Write a clean, crisp, clear 
        Objective or leave it off.
    
     -- Objective Statements are optional.  Don't confuse the 
        Objective with the Summary Statement.  Your Summary should 
        be well...a dynamic Summary of YOU.  Three to five lines at 
        the most.  
    
     -- Don't generalize yourself thinking someone is going to like 
        something about you, you'll end up looking like the last 
        three Summaries they read--ho-hum.  They know you’re 
        hardworking, no need to stuff that in your Summary right?
    
     -- If you’re not sure of your focus and must make your 
        Objective and Summary more generalized, then plan on using 
        the telephone a lot more so you can Engage the hiring 
        entity.  Actually you should plan on using and using and 
        using the telephone.  If you aren't comfortable with the 
        phone look for our upcoming Teleseminar "HOW TO USE THE 
        TELEPHONE TO GET A NEW POSITION" on the ARALeadingEdge 
        site, http://www.ARALeadingEdge.com  Details will be 
        coming up in the next month.
     
    
    Tip 4: THE DAILY GRIND
    
     Some people write their resume as if everyone wants to know 
    exactly what they do from the time they get their coffee in the 
    morning to ad nauseum at 5:00 PM.  Hit the high points; don’t 
    drone on paper, every job duty in the last 4 years with Wigit 
    Corp.  does not need to be accounted for.  Give them the sizzle, 
    let them call you if they want the steak.  Some people write a 
    four-page cow and wonder why they never get a call.  When 
    Harriet HR has 150 to 1,000 resumes in her email, it's risky to 
    even think your going to get consideration from her if she has 
    to slog through your 9 to 5.  She's got her own to worry about.
     
    
    Tip 5: POLISH OR PERISH
    
     Print the dang thing and read it out loud to yourself.  You’ll 
    get a real eye opener and you'll find some stuff where you'll 
    say ugh--like the word too for two or their for there.  Use an 
    old proofreader’s trick to catch misspellings (no Virginia, you 
    cannot trust your computer) read the lines from right to left. 
     
     Avoid hackneyed trite terms: results oriented, seasoned  
    (sounds old doesn't it?), self-motivated--but of course!  
    
     Here's one of my favorites: I'll start reading and on the first 
    line is the word "developed" then on the 4th line is that same 
    old hiccup.  Whoa there it is again on the 8th line, by the 5th 
    "developed" I'm starting to wonder if the guy is a photographer, 
    not a project manager.  Watch out for duplicate words.
    
     Since we're polishing I have a couple of other axes to grind:
    
     -- I'm talking to Joe and he tells me he's taken a month off 
        after being downsized.  As I glance down at his resume, I 
        see it has 2000 to present.  To present? Seems like he 
        could have spent the last month changing the ending date 
        on his last job.  At that point, I start to question his 
        integrity and his work ethic.  Keep your resume current.  
        The "I didn't have a chance to update it" doesn't fly well 
        with an employer.
    
     -- Yes, at least 10% of the executives out there put white 
        lies, little fibs, whatever you want to call them on their 
        resumes.  It’s dishonest so don’t be one of the 10%.  What 
        is it you don't understand about "Thou shall not"?
     
     -- Your Summary Statement looks like you copied every phrase 
        in every resume-writing book you found Saturday afternoon 
        at Borders.  Sparkling vocabulary is great, but be genuine.
     
    Being genuine, that’s the key in life and in writing your resume. 
    
    
    
    Laura leads the Free Resume Boo Boos Teleseminar weekly, every 
    Wednesday at 1:00 or 7:00 pm Eastern For details or to make 
    reservations go email mailto:seminar@araleadingedge.com or 
    call 1-888-280-5291 ext. 16 now. 
    



    Writer's Resource Box:
    About Laura Gabel
     
    Laura Gabel, Vice President, Client Relations for Alan Randall 
    Associates, Inc. (ARA), is well known in the Washington, D.C. 
    outplacement community. She has written articles and been 
    interviewed on television about career management issues.  With 
    over 10 years experience with executive career transformation, 
    her on-target "Market Assessments" have helped clients from a 
    U.S. Ambassador to a technology developer for the "Shock and Awe" 
    war room.  Laura received her B.A. and M.L.S. degrees from the 
    University of Pittsburgh.  She has inspired hundreds of people 
    with her insights and philosophy on "How to position yourself 
    for the next decade". To inquire about scheduling Ms. Gabel 
    for an interview or an appearance please visit Laura and the 
    executive career coaching team at http://www.ARACareers.com and 
    http://www.ARALeadingEdge.com   Leading Edge is a Leading Source 
    for job search and cutting edge job search seminars.




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